I think those who read this look for something to stand out which in all my years writing things,
I am sure I can't blend the right words to appeal to the masses because we all have a critique set of wants we look for and then maybe some we compromise on. Example, I know I'm funny, a very creative humor but it's in the moment when it happens, in saying that doesn't display a particular que for you to say maybe I should write this guy back and see what happens. Nor me mentioning a list of hobbies and what not because known of that is a platform for chemistry. Yes, if I was a fireman, and you are, grew up in a house that was, or your family has ties then that creates a key a bond. The only key issue is that there are so many things that make each one of us up that we leave one thing out in something like this, we could miss out on attracting the right person. Or make them suffer reading through a short novel for no reason and take out what some call the mystery of another person. So I am opting out of all that. We go off of looks first and foremost and if that's good enough for you, then write hi, see where it goes and then who knows.