It must be nice to only need to post a 1/2 naked pic. displaying a six-pack and say something to the effect of: "I'll finish this later" "just ask," etc., etc.,..under "your description." Unfortunately, for some of us average Joe's who haven't used this type of service in a long time, we are disillusioned in that relying on our sense of humors and actually putting some time and effort into our profiles (in which I'm finding out that a lot of women are skeptical about anyways) is the way to go. I can't say I blame these women who have so graciously taken the time to write (which I'm guessing took longer to do than to read 3 paragraphs) and point out how "exhausting" it was to read a detailed and sincere excerpt of who and what someone represented. However, never let it be said that I'm not pliable and cannot take constructive criticism well =)
So here is the revised, new and improved introduction. On second thought, I'm pretty busy right now and will finish this later....